Hello all,
To let me first start off, I'm relatively new here so pardon me if I am missing some form of etiquette. I am a long time fan of Fallout and cinematic machinima. I have made Fallout cinematic machinima's for some time now. Now to the point of why I am here. I am going to start a Fallout series on YouTube and am looking for help. I have the plot and script put together. I am looking for you good people to analyze my script and plot. Also, voice actors are HEAVILY welcome. Please do keep in mind that I may have the script and plot done but there are some final details I need to take care of as well, such as character names. Those are tough. Here is a summary of each episode/part. If you would like the full copy, please let me know. If you would like to help in anyway, don't hesitate to ask! Thanks!
STORY ORDER:
I. Our Lady Hope Hospital
II. Regeneration
III. Familiar Faces
IV. Menial Standards
V. An inkling chance
(Season 1)
I.) Realizing that our protagonists body cannot adapt well to this new environment he decides to search for medical supplies, he pulls up a prewar map of Washington D.C. which shows there is a hospital not relatively far from his location. He gears up and heads out to Our Lady Hope Hospital in the heart of DC. Little does he know that DC is infested with a largely radiated creature known to the locals as Super Mutants. He is subjected to fast pace decision making and shooting.
II.) After being knocked out and captured by the Super Mutants at the hospital, our protagonist realizes that there is nothing here for him and must think quickly to avoid being killed. He comes up with a plan and executes it. With some unplanned events occurring, he eventually escapes into an apartment complex where he is continually being chased but manages to stop them. He recovers and moves on out of the heart of DC only to be greeted by familiar face.
III.) While recovering from his Super Mutant endeavor, our protagonist is greeted by three other people from his vault whom were forced to leave also. They exchange gratitude towards each other and talk about their experience so far. One of the group offers for him to join them, the protagonist declines because he has other priorities. Another member says he remembers the protagonists brother making it our alive with them days before. They exchange information and the protagonist leaves the group in good faith.
IV.) After learning that the protagonists brother was taken captive by an unknown group of mercenaries/slavers, he embarks to a place called Rivet City where he thinks he'll be able to learn about the whereabouts of his brother. He finds a mercenary there who after some persuasion tells him where he last heard of that groups last location. He tells him it was near a place called Paradise Falls. He does trading at Rivet City and leaves. He arrives at Paradise Falls several days later. The sight is astoundingly grim. Any and everyone is welcome. The source of death, smut, and slavery for the whole capital wasteland. He goes in and begins asking questions and examining the area. He sees his brother in one of the cages.
V.) Our protagonist graciously greets his brother, grateful he is alive but angered he has been enslaved here. He quickly chat and our protagonist is ushered away by slavers. He goes to the bar to gather his thoughts on how he could rescue his brother. He approaches one of the salesmen, asks for a price and it is outrageously high. He decides he isn't going to get anywhere by buying him. He decides he's going to have to break him out. He comes up with a plan to deactivate all the slave collars and start a slave riot and sneak him out then. Although, not everything always goes according to plan.
My YouTube channel for video references:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCXmzHk3yRTkyfwQrts5YSyA
To let me first start off, I'm relatively new here so pardon me if I am missing some form of etiquette. I am a long time fan of Fallout and cinematic machinima. I have made Fallout cinematic machinima's for some time now. Now to the point of why I am here. I am going to start a Fallout series on YouTube and am looking for help. I have the plot and script put together. I am looking for you good people to analyze my script and plot. Also, voice actors are HEAVILY welcome. Please do keep in mind that I may have the script and plot done but there are some final details I need to take care of as well, such as character names. Those are tough. Here is a summary of each episode/part. If you would like the full copy, please let me know. If you would like to help in anyway, don't hesitate to ask! Thanks!
STORY ORDER:
I. Our Lady Hope Hospital
II. Regeneration
III. Familiar Faces
IV. Menial Standards
V. An inkling chance
(Season 1)
I.) Realizing that our protagonists body cannot adapt well to this new environment he decides to search for medical supplies, he pulls up a prewar map of Washington D.C. which shows there is a hospital not relatively far from his location. He gears up and heads out to Our Lady Hope Hospital in the heart of DC. Little does he know that DC is infested with a largely radiated creature known to the locals as Super Mutants. He is subjected to fast pace decision making and shooting.
II.) After being knocked out and captured by the Super Mutants at the hospital, our protagonist realizes that there is nothing here for him and must think quickly to avoid being killed. He comes up with a plan and executes it. With some unplanned events occurring, he eventually escapes into an apartment complex where he is continually being chased but manages to stop them. He recovers and moves on out of the heart of DC only to be greeted by familiar face.
III.) While recovering from his Super Mutant endeavor, our protagonist is greeted by three other people from his vault whom were forced to leave also. They exchange gratitude towards each other and talk about their experience so far. One of the group offers for him to join them, the protagonist declines because he has other priorities. Another member says he remembers the protagonists brother making it our alive with them days before. They exchange information and the protagonist leaves the group in good faith.
IV.) After learning that the protagonists brother was taken captive by an unknown group of mercenaries/slavers, he embarks to a place called Rivet City where he thinks he'll be able to learn about the whereabouts of his brother. He finds a mercenary there who after some persuasion tells him where he last heard of that groups last location. He tells him it was near a place called Paradise Falls. He does trading at Rivet City and leaves. He arrives at Paradise Falls several days later. The sight is astoundingly grim. Any and everyone is welcome. The source of death, smut, and slavery for the whole capital wasteland. He goes in and begins asking questions and examining the area. He sees his brother in one of the cages.
V.) Our protagonist graciously greets his brother, grateful he is alive but angered he has been enslaved here. He quickly chat and our protagonist is ushered away by slavers. He goes to the bar to gather his thoughts on how he could rescue his brother. He approaches one of the salesmen, asks for a price and it is outrageously high. He decides he isn't going to get anywhere by buying him. He decides he's going to have to break him out. He comes up with a plan to deactivate all the slave collars and start a slave riot and sneak him out then. Although, not everything always goes according to plan.
My YouTube channel for video references:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCXmzHk3yRTkyfwQrts5YSyA
