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[font size=1" color="#FF0000]LAST EDITED ON Jul-03-00 AT 03:29PM (GMT)[p]Okay Folks, here is my first attempt at a Fan Fic about Fallout, let me know what you think!

This story takes place on Thanksgiving day. A few hours before the Water chip breaks in Vault 13...

All the citzens of Vault 13 looked forward to Thanksgiving, with all sorts of real and synthesized foods. The Overseer was the center of attention after he broke the wish bone from the Synthesized Turkey. At this moment, A technician comes in screaming. Taking attention away from the joyous occasion, The Overseer decided to meet with the technician in private. A few hours later, The Overseer came out of a meeting room, with a harsh yet gloomy expression on his face. He took to his chamber and gave the following Address: "Citezens of Vault 13, an urgent matter was laid before me only a few moments ago. I do not wish to cause alarm to you all. But I will discuss this matter tomarrow morning." The citizens then continued with the celebration giving little thought to the Overseer's speech. Brian MiKelly, one of the many citezens of Vault 13, was unable to sleep after hearing the Overseer's speech. It was about 3:00am when his viewscreen in his quarters started to flash, he responded sleepily "...yeess?" "Brian, this is the Overseer, I have selected you for a special mission, meet me in the meeting hall at 0500." With that the monitor deactivated and Brian turned on the lights to his quarters. He took a shower for about half an hour wondering what the Overseer's "mission" would endure. With that, he put on his Vault-tek Jumpsuit and synthesized a meal. As he was eating it he thought to himself would this possibly be the last meal he would ever eat...

(to be continued)...
 
I welcome all comments opinions, thoughts, ect. you may have...
 
welllll your not exactly talentless but some parts seemed abit uninspired.
 
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