The outsider.

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Vaur went along the street whit Verg and Thor anlong som scatered cars. They had have a good day,
The merchant they came over had ben very unluky today, they had not.
Five hundred bucks each, a very good result indeed. But his name was not Vaur it was actualy Sam, Sam Jhonson.
Life had finaly smiled his vay, a good car, a house in the best part of town and a good job. The job was good payed
100000 dollar a year.
Yes, he felt very luky this day when he got home. He jumped up on the chouch and turned on the TV.
"Bah just bullshit" He said when he got to the news "The situasion is critcal as the president" he changed channel.
"This vault is one of many going to save peapole from the treat of nuclear devastion" The tv screamed against him.
He turned of the tv. "The Nabour had bought some rom in a vault like that" He thought, hmm he was actualy tierd so
he vent to bed.
The sirens was what woke him up. He heard the sound and realised this was not a drill.
He sat in the bed for a minute crying, "No not now" he tought.
Then he heared a sound, someone was knocking on the door he got upp still in shock, and opend the door.
It was a police officer."We sugest tou go to the closest Fallout shelter imidieately Sir" He said.
Sam sudenly realised that this was his life that was at stake he said "Ok" and went in.
Inside he got on some clothing, he took aloot of food and he vent to a desk and got the desert eagle he had there.
Then he got out, he knew of some fallout shelters. He ran as fast as he could and around five minutes later he got
into the town.
There some peapole tried to get into a sewer "fools" he thought, then he felt an intense heat and he changed his
mind. As son as he saw the mushrom he did not think, he jumped with his head first down the sewer.
the nekst morning he woke upp ang got to the surface then the mutation had already started.

Vaur as he was called now, lokced behind him and and loked at thor, allways weilding a hammer.
Then he loked forvard and saw to strangers comming against him. They was friends of thor.
After a while they suddenly spotted a man dressed upp all in metal. "Must be our lucky day" thor said.
Vaur looked at him, he thought he had seen something familiar before. "Lets kill him" Verg said.
Then they attacked, one of Thors friends was very fast. He was number one to die.
The metal man had noticed them now, he just grabed Thors buddy in the neck and then he lifted him
up with one hand. It came a cracking sound as the neck broke. The body was trown upon vaur and he fell with the
body on top. He would have died if Verg had not got there. Verg yelled loud and drove the knife into the
man. The knife prelled of,then the metal man grabbed his arm twisting it so Verg fell to the ground with the
stranger still holding his arm. Then the metal man put his foot on his neck and stamped with it.
Verg said no more. Then thor got there, punching the man in the helmet with the sledgehammer. the man flew
over, but to Thors suprise he got upp again.
Thor tried another hit, the man cathed his sledgehammer and punched him over. Thor fell aginst a wall
and before he got upp his brain was visibole, all over the wall.
The Stranger turned to see the last of Thors friends attack, the stranger tock his head with his arm and
drove it straight trough the wall.
Vaur remebered it this was a t-51 power armor, he goot up poled up the dessert eagle.
Then he saw that the stranger was heading straight for him. Vaur emptied his clip still no result.
the stranger reached him punched him upp aginst, a wall taking the spear he had taken from verg, then he drew
the back of the spear trough Vaurs body with large strenght but the spear continued trough the wall behind him
and sudenly he hang there. On the wall.
Vaur tried to stand, and as he saw back he felt that life had betrayed him again.
he slowly closed his eyes and it was black.

The name of the man in the power armor was Loxley and he had just joined the Brothehood of steel.


to be continued.

please come with comments.

ps:Sorry about the grammar i come from Norway.
 
The knife prelled off? Can see you come from Norway :)

so do i :P

Anyway, the contents were great but as you said, the grammar wasn't easy to understand.
 
I agree. Excellent story. But it was (no offence intended) a little hard to understand occasionally.
Other than that, Fantastic!
 
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